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Wednesday, June 21, 2006

Haven't named it....mmm.....

Ok, now this poem i don't think is complete... I wrote it for someone, whom i have just started dating, may be there are more twists and turns to come, i may add on to it later,
Crack in the door, stores creaking sunlight
Wood in the joints cannot hold on tight
When it shrieks open the history
Dust dances over the rays
Settles over footsteps of one of those days.
One of those days, I was walking down the stairs
I was holding on to my thoughts bundled up together
I locked them in you, its a secret you won't share
Its a feeling that I have, that may be you are unaware
How would you know, how much am I in you.
When there is a crack in door, why do you need keyhole
You can look through your eyes, why do you need a keyhole.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

"A Crack Of Darkness"

darkness is a dark-nest
which nests delusions
its a 'sweet' place where ull lose ur emotions
It was 'Her' (darkness) who caused the crack
Cuz she was dying to dissolve in the sack (of sunlight)
it was U who kept them apart
but lady, r u dead shore that the crack is jus a crack, not a hole in ur heart?
Ever want to 'c' the darkness
jus close your eyes,n open ur I's (instinct n intution)
n ull never need sunlight!!

hehe...jus showing off....overlook the mistake cuz its an 'impromptu' attempt...its a sort of prequel to ur poems...tried to amalmagate the two...waise its the first time ive unleashed my poetic prowess to the world...

ur psycho friend...

P.S.- words in brackets r jus illustrations...

Anonymous said...

nice words babes ......carry on - nini